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2009年7月15日水曜日

book reviw#10-the outing


One day children went to Zoo by bus. In the way to zoo bus stopped to rest. When they rest Wilf kicked a stone and his shoe is gone away into the river with stone. They can’t get it back. When they arrive at zoo it began to rain. So children fed up. They got back to bus and leave for museum cause of rain. They watched a big dinosaur. They watched film about dinosaur with lady’s explanation. They go to shop and buy something. For example Wilf buy book, Nadim buy a model of dinosaur. After that trip Nadim and Wilf went to home with Biff and Chip. They began to make a model. Soon the magic key started to glow and they left for magic adventure.

I think this story is unfinished but there is no story of magic adventure. Writer should write. I want to read later story. I like magic key’s story but I don’t so like this one.
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